Score: 9

"Heh"

submission: XxxXFlesh ReelXxxX

date: February 17, 2007

Wow man I seriously have to admit, your good, very good at what you do. I checked out your site and youve got a nice little web comic that has very much more sphisticated art then most of the web comics i read lol.

Of course noir and seriousness is not my thing I did want to say, I really do like your style, very profesinol and original. Keep up the good work man.

Score: 5

"Ok well"

submission: The Melcrosum Person Pt.1

date: February 17, 2007

The graphics almost cut it. The sound however, did not. The humor would of been better if the sound was better, and if you would of used diffrent background music for diffrent scenes it probly would of helped you out.

After watching some of the jokes I could only help but think to my self: "You know if I actully would of been able to hear that it probly would of been funny".

The flash is ok, work on the graphics a bit, get your sound to an audible level, work on the plot line a bit and I think you could do good.

Score: 8

"lol"

submission: Phoenix Wrong Chaos

date: February 17, 2007

Well there were some good and some original parts in there. I liked how you tryed to put your own twist on some of them. (like the disco lights with the fat guy and the cartmin one).

People are going to complain about originality. If you really want people to take you seriously, next time make some of your own graphics and have about half of it be with PW and half of it be with your original charecters and see how that works for you. It will add more originality to it.

But overall i liked it, you got a 5 from me incase you were wondering ^^.