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I only review what i see. I only tell the truth and I give movies rateings based on the actulle content of the movie.
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That people keep saying the animations bad. It's not really bad it's just different from most flash animations. It reminds me of a sort of "Roco's Modern Life" meets "Bugs Bunny" style. I like it.
Author's Response:
Most people around NG don't like different things. They think it's... different so it isn't cool, because it's... different. I don't get those people. But I respect even their opinion:) Thanks for the review, glad you like different things
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Really Interesting concept. Work on making it smoother during the screen transitions, expand the play field every now and then. Maybe add a color selector (red might hurt some peoples eyes after a while).
I'm digging it though, it could use a few adjustments but good overall.
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Wow man I seriously have to admit, your good, very good at what you do. I checked out your site and youve got a nice little web comic that has very much more sphisticated art then most of the web comics i read lol.
Of course noir and seriousness is not my thing I did want to say, I really do like your style, very profesinol and original. Keep up the good work man.
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The graphics almost cut it. The sound however, did not. The humor would of been better if the sound was better, and if you would of used diffrent background music for diffrent scenes it probly would of helped you out.
After watching some of the jokes I could only help but think to my self: "You know if I actully would of been able to hear that it probly would of been funny".
The flash is ok, work on the graphics a bit, get your sound to an audible level, work on the plot line a bit and I think you could do good.
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Well there were some good and some original parts in there. I liked how you tryed to put your own twist on some of them. (like the disco lights with the fat guy and the cartmin one).
People are going to complain about originality. If you really want people to take you seriously, next time make some of your own graphics and have about half of it be with PW and half of it be with your original charecters and see how that works for you. It will add more originality to it.
But overall i liked it, you got a 5 from me incase you were wondering ^^.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Best comment I have received. I will take note of that. :D
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I havent given a movie a 10 in a LOOOOOOOOONG time. Let me just make this a bit more clear though:
Graphics: 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10
I havent seen a movie that WELL animated in a LONG time either. This is what NG is all about. Your graphics were realistic and cartoony all at the same time. They flowed VERY well and the movie it self had a good plot and made a good point as well.
Please..make more and keep up the good work. This deserves front page, i wish more people on NG knew how to animate like you.
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Thank you!
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Ya it was weird., but you have a style simalar to...well..."Bear Hellow" and "Tv Tray". It's that "mess with your mind and make you think im on drugs approach."
What I cant belive is that SO MANY people did not get that the reason the subtitles were wrong is not becuase you dident takeyour time, but becuase it was suppose to add to the creepy "wtf"ness of the film and it was bascily succesful.
And for people who think there just putting "anything" on the front page. Their not just putting "anything" on it. Every genere of movies gets it chance if it dose it's job correctly. and in the exprimental, this week it's "T.V. Tray" and "Potluck" that made the cut for front page.
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No one has mentioned the refrence yet xD. Is everyone on NG so young they dont know they is a parody of something Jim Carrey did and im pretty sure it was on: In liveing color. LOlL. Great job man, i love the parody.
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I think the worst part about this is three things, the wiggly animation at a lot of points, characters, and the fact that you brought it in to late. Why the characters? Becuase you did not make any emotion connection with the viewer and the characters.
If your going to put them in perial you need to make the veiwer actully care about and like your characters so that way when something happens to them the viewer gose "Oh noes! Not ___. Come on man, you can beat him!".
Which brings me to "youu brought it in to late".(The wiggly animation is self explainitory). Why do i say you brought it in to late? Becuase had you brought it in sooner and actully gave some more back story to why they were in the cave, or exploring before they were running away, why they were running away ect ect. It would of helped your secound point of makeing the audience care about the characters at some point.
I think this had potential to be better. And mabey still had potential to be better but you need to work on it a bit.
(btw: a kid with spikey brown hair and a blond chick are two char's who are WAAAY over done.).
Author's Response:
well...this episode IS basically the introduction to the rest of the story. you'll hopefully feel differently when the other 2 ep.'s are released. i appreciate the constructive criticism though, thanks.
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That was great guys. I love the style and it was pretty original for the most part. I was laughing pretty much the whole time. keep up the good work.
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